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BBC Bitesize

 

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On Saturday evening, football fans around the world eagerly watched the Champions League Final. The stadium was filled with excitement as the two best teams in Europe battled for the famous trophy. Supporters waved flags, sang songs, and cheered loudly throughout the match. Every pass, tackle, and shot kept the crowd on the edge of their seats. After a thrilling game, the winning team lifted the trophy high into the air while their fans celebrated with joy and pride. It was a night that players and supporters would remember for many years.

Monday 1st June

LC: To write an independent formal letter of complaint

How to write a formal letter

Feelings and Emotions

  • shocked
  • furious
  • disappointed
  • upset
  • distressed
  • horrified
  • frustrated
  • concerned
  • annoyed
  • terrified

Formal Complaint Phrases

  • I am writing to complain about...
  • I was extremely disappointed by...
  • I expect an explanation for...
  • I strongly believe that...
  • I would like to express my concerns about...
  • I was unhappy with...
  • This situation was unacceptable because...
  • I feel that better precautions should have been taken.

Describing the Incident

  • suddenly
  • without warning
  • chaos erupted
  • panic spread
  • visitors screamed
  • the crowd gasped
  • the lion pounced
  • people rushed away
  • keepers arrived too late
  • confusion filled the zoo

Powerful Verbs

  • pounced
  • roared
  • grabbed
  • swallowed
  • shouted
  • demanded
  • rushed
  • stared
  • trembled
  • complained

Adjectives

  • dangerous
  • terrifying
  • appalling
  • careless
  • irresponsible
  • shocking
  • dreadful
  • chaotic
  • unacceptable
  • frightening

 Requests and Expectations

  • I expect immediate action.
  • Safety measures should be improved.
  • I would appreciate a response.
  • Visitors deserve better protection.
  • This must never happen again.
  • I hope changes will be made quickly.
  • A refund would be appropriate.
  • I look forward to your reply.

Useful Conjunctions

  • furthermore
  • however
  • although
  • therefore
  • because
  • meanwhile
  • as a result
  • in addition

 

Monday 1st June

LC: To understand the process of mummification

Mummification