LC: To write an opening paragraph of a narrative which combines characters and setting.

Can you help me to write the opening paragraph about our character seeing the Iron man for the first time?

One evening, whilst ______ was beside the sparkling river, he felt a huge shadow tower over him. It was the gigantic Iron Man, a colossal figure of shining metal...

Now it is your turn:

Success Criteria:

Combines characters and setting.

Contains adverbs.

Complex sentences with commas to separate clauses.

Conjunctions.