Thursday
With your partner, use the 3 pieces of A4 paper and pair of scissors to make the tallest tree. These are the only materials available.
Your tree must be able to stand up, unaided.
It must have a clear trunk and branches - leaves are not a requirement.
Good luck.
Thursday 26th June
Today you are going to be writing an independent flashback story from the perspective of Albert.
1. Structure & Organisation
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I have written in the first person ("I", "me", "my").
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My narrative is written in the past tense, with a clear flashback to an earlier time.
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The flashback is clearly introduced (e.g., using a trigger like an object, sound, or memory).
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There is a clear return to the present by the end of the narrative.
2. Language & Style
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I use descriptive language to show feelings, thoughts, and setting.
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I include figurative language (e.g., similes, metaphors, personification) to create imagery.
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I vary my sentence openers and lengths for effect.
3. Character & Emotion
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I show how the main character feels during both the present and flashback scenes.
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I use internal thoughts and reflections to show the character’s emotions and growth.
4. Cohesion & Devices
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I use time adverbials (e.g., Suddenly, Years ago, At that moment) to guide the reader.
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I use transitions between the present and the past smoothly.
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I use paragraphs to separate ideas and shifts in time.
Thursday 26th June
LC: To work within a budget.
LC: To analyse the nutritional content of food.
LC: To solve multi-step problems.