Wednesday
English
Wednesday 18th December 2024
LC: Improve writing in the light of evaluation.
What do you need to improve?
Did you remember to . . .
* Punctuate your sentences correctly?
* Include complex sentences?
* Help the reader visualise what you saw by including noun phrases?
* Help the reader know the order of events by using time adverbs and adverbials?
* Use effective verbs?
Can you spot all of the mistakes in the letter below?
the orphanage
Grimloch Lane
Grimloch
G12 7XY
dear Robert.
I hope you well. I am feelin happy coz somethin very special has appened in Grimloch and I want to told you all about it
when I was looking out of the window on day, I heard a sound outside. I downstairs raced. One of the trees had turned into the shap of an owl. after I saw it I stared at it for a time long. Over the next few days, we a different animal each day. There was prettys parrot, a rabbit and a elephant
one day we discovered the most masterpiece magnificent. I t was a huge dragon shap ed out of tow trees. Everyone was very eskited and the celebrations went on all through the day and into the day.
as I was walking home I spotted a familiar person. I didn’t know him He turned to look at me and I Discovered it was the night Gardener – the person who had been making the topiaries. next He asked me to help him Because there were a lot of trees in the park.
we cut trees into the shapes of different zoo animals We made a long-necked giraffe and an enormous whale We made a huge roaring bear Eventually I became really tired and fell asleep. the kind, caring Night Gardener carried me down the ladder and left me a pair of shears so that I could carry on making topiaries.
Although the leaves fell from the trees in Winter,
Maybe you could come for a visit to see for yourself.
Loved it william
Can you re-write the letter without the mistakes.
Reading
Wednesday 18th December 2024
LC: To infer characters thoughts from their actions.
Can you remember what it means to infer?
Let's watch a short clip to help you remember.
Inferring is a bit like being a detective. You have to find the clues to work out the hidden information.
Imagine the main character in a story skips into a room, smiling brightly and waving to their friends. You could infer that the character is happy.
The text hasn’t told you the character is happy, but you can work it out from the clues given.
Let's take a look at the following text together:
How do you think Captain Longworth is feeling?
Captain Longworth is feeling...
because...
In your Reading Journals try the next one.
How was Tina feeling?
Tina was feeling...
because...
Maths
18.12.24
Revision 1 continued
Pages 137 - 142
3B Maths - Revision 1 - Autumn 2
RE
Wednesday 18th December 2024
LC: To identify Christians who listened to and followed God.
Where did we go last week?
Who did we listen to?
Do you think he listens to and follows God?
Talk Partners
Think about your learning in RE this term.
Who listened to and followed God in the bible?
What are these people called?
What part of the bible were the stories we learned about from?
Christians who might be described as people who listened to and followed God from the bible.
Christians who might be described as people who listen to and follow God in 2024.
Activity
First, you need to identify who listened to and followed God from the bible.
There should be three people!
Next, you need to identify who listens to and follows God in 2024.
There should be three people!
Challenge
For each prophet, can you identify how they listened to God?
What did they do?
